Opinions on this Poem of mine?

[Steppenwolf]

It's a half as*ed attempt at a creation story..


"some sort of cosmic concussion?!.."


it started the moment god tripped and then fell
he smashed into pieces earth heaven and hell
and all inbetween or ever was known
the universe started with that stolid blow

first formed the stars then the planets and air
then the rocks and the trees til the part that's aware
lastly evolved in the beings that arose
from the incident the accident randomly chose

then sorrows and joys came with laughter and tears
all just the same for thousands of years
the colours the sounds the feelings and smells
he tasted the world inside all life's shells

with no memory but yearning for something untold
strewn fragments of god got scared then got old
and stuck to routines and clung to the same
pre destined methods of numbing the pain

but behind the confusion and fear and mistakes
lay his sad grinning eyes forever awake
reflecting a feeling of something unspoke
a sameness within the all that had broke

so with this in mind now is as was then
that it all still grows clear when he trips again
a billion creations on endless repeat
it's just god (broke in pieces) but always complete.