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soccergurrlie13
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I currently have four chapters up, and the first is kind of an intro. Please be honest, and if you find something you want to critique on, also try your best to specifically explain what it is I could fix or change. Thanks!
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/inkheart13/256444/
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/inkheart13/256444/