opinions on my poem..?

*Dear Life*

New member
Restless

Dusk has fallen
Stars dust the velvet sky
Laced with a deep scarlet

Be still! My beating heart
For you are restless tonight

Silenced by a love like no other
Love that thrust the knife within
Pierced by the blade
You bleed from the strike
Embedded with so much pain

Be still! My beating heart
For you are restless tonight

When the new day dawns
The dew will settle upon us
I will watch the golden sun rise
And draw my final breath
Give way to the eternal silence

Be still! My beating heart
For you are no longer restless
 
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