Opinions on my poem??

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I am writing a poem; first of all it needs a title. And I don't know how to continue...thank you for your help!

Did you actually have a dream come true
Has someone said "I love you?"
Is there more to life than this?
Or is it mere existence?
Tell me the truth of what you know...
For I am willing to learn and grow?
I am on the cusp of something new
I am not sure otherwise I'd tell you
What makes the dream come alive
How do you merely survive
I look for the One true Being
I'm thinking of taking out "I look for that One True Being" so you can either work with it or leave it out; thanks!
 
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