Opinions on my poem please! be honest.?

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My True Heartache


Can I let you go? I wonder if I can, you were my inspiration, half the time my one reason

to breathe another day. Although our fingertips never touched in reality, it was in my

dreams that you and I enveloped in the sweet waves of forbidden passion. I wanted you,

and deep down in the very depth of your soul, I knew you wanted me too. We used to be

so close, talking and laughing like best friends, I guess we were. But then the cruel heat of

summer days blazed us apart, only to return on a cool autumn day so changed. You older,

more worn then my saddened memories, and I a more graceful, beautiful young girl. I

realized then that our worlds were to different, that though are fates intertwined in

complicated knots, but not connected. I had to say goodbye, you were my protector

against the harsh cold truth of reality, and when I stepped away from that shield though

necessary, it felt entirely wrong. Darling I love you, though you may never know that,

and even though were are separate in body, you’ll always be in my heart.
 
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