Opinions for my poetry?

Bob

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Deceit

People cut themselves all the time
They think each cut is its own injury
But they are really just ripping open the lifetime wound
It breaks the surface
Blood pours out
People see the real you
Nothing
Shriveled and lifeless
You lose consciousness
And you die alone
The veil of torn deceit draining your life
And putting it back from where it came

Resonance

The words echo on my mind
They empty it of all else
The message hits hard
Ripples emanate
It is not mellow
But an emptiness which echoes itself
Which echoes the silence of poetic thought

Tranquility

A falsified lifetime sensation
When that which is not possible becomes possible
But only for a second
Our lives are filled with turmoil
What we seek is death
What we fear is death
Something we hold dearly but fear
Something we seek to prevent
To prolong the stress
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