Close your eyes and imagine...
A world free of famine.
In the hills, you breath.
As your lungs, they freeze.
A benevolent wind calms your heart.
As your soul begins to depart.
Standing bare foot in lush green grass.
To this life, you hold fast.
For this world is frozen in time.
The mountains of life you now climb.
A perpetual sea of souls as clouds.
The gulch of dreams, it floods and shrouds.
A fallout of peace sweeps the land.
As all conflict turns to sand.
Chained to life by sheer willpower.
Need not support in your final hour.
Alone.
You survived.
On your own.
Revived.
Nobody is left.
Succumbed to death.
Only you and her.
Only you and Earth.
I think i should take out the last rhyme since there is a verse before with no rhyme. the non-rhyme would indicate the end of the poem. this seems kinda misleading.
so, what, 1-10? 11 perhaps?
A world free of famine.
In the hills, you breath.
As your lungs, they freeze.
A benevolent wind calms your heart.
As your soul begins to depart.
Standing bare foot in lush green grass.
To this life, you hold fast.
For this world is frozen in time.
The mountains of life you now climb.
A perpetual sea of souls as clouds.
The gulch of dreams, it floods and shrouds.
A fallout of peace sweeps the land.
As all conflict turns to sand.
Chained to life by sheer willpower.
Need not support in your final hour.
Alone.
You survived.
On your own.
Revived.
Nobody is left.
Succumbed to death.
Only you and her.
Only you and Earth.
I think i should take out the last rhyme since there is a verse before with no rhyme. the non-rhyme would indicate the end of the poem. this seems kinda misleading.
so, what, 1-10? 11 perhaps?