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C.C. GiRL
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the following poem is a sestina, there is a certain rhyme scheme i had to use as well as a certain length, thats why its abit long.
but i would like to hear constructed critisim about it. thankyu
Forever Together
If everything happens for a reason:
then my whole past was arranged
to ensure i'd be with you.
The one who has me love.
You are my now
& forever.
There were others in the past that didnt last to forever
& it'd be clear to see that you were the reason.
Look at us now.
Forever, together we'll be arranged.
Because of our love,
Because of you.
I, heart, you,
forever.
& if everyone isnt blessed with this love
then theres no better reason,
to last forever, together with out lifes arranged
begining now.
this perfection cant only be for now.
if everywhere i am i think of you.
wondering if its true forever, together well be arranged
& in your embrace its easy to find forever
this being me reason.
to trust this undefinit love.
Im in love.
& not just for the satisfaction of now.
But to fill my life with reason
& is it safe, to say I need you,
forever?
If its not guarenteed forever, together well be arranged
& since God only knows how my futures arranged
ill love,
forever,
in right now.
ill cherish every moment with you
knowing im on cloud 9 & your the reason
Arranged together right now,
we have that love that'll last; between me & you
I hope, forever youll stay to give me reason.
but i would like to hear constructed critisim about it. thankyu
Forever Together
If everything happens for a reason:
then my whole past was arranged
to ensure i'd be with you.
The one who has me love.
You are my now
& forever.
There were others in the past that didnt last to forever
& it'd be clear to see that you were the reason.
Look at us now.
Forever, together we'll be arranged.
Because of our love,
Because of you.
I, heart, you,
forever.
& if everyone isnt blessed with this love
then theres no better reason,
to last forever, together with out lifes arranged
begining now.
this perfection cant only be for now.
if everywhere i am i think of you.
wondering if its true forever, together well be arranged
& in your embrace its easy to find forever
this being me reason.
to trust this undefinit love.
Im in love.
& not just for the satisfaction of now.
But to fill my life with reason
& is it safe, to say I need you,
forever?
If its not guarenteed forever, together well be arranged
& since God only knows how my futures arranged
ill love,
forever,
in right now.
ill cherish every moment with you
knowing im on cloud 9 & your the reason
Arranged together right now,
we have that love that'll last; between me & you
I hope, forever youll stay to give me reason.