Opinion on my poem called "Chocolate covered strawberry" ^_^?

Jam-O

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I wrote this when I was in 10th grade for my final poem assignment...and I had to read it to my class teel me what you think...


Oh delicious, chocolate covered strawberry

How much I want you,

You will never know

The thought of your sugar on my tongue

Sends me into an everlasting ecstasy



Delicate chocolate covered strawberry

Can I have a taste?

Can I lick on your chocolaty outer layer?

Can I bite into your soft, sensual body?

Or are you too pure to be touched by my lips


I can eat you up quick

Your sugary sweet bits swimming around in my mouth

Chocolate smeared across my face

The thought gets me so high


I can eat you real slow

Savor every bite

Digging my teeth into your gentle surface

As my saliva bathes your inner being in a river of succulence

A feeling of unimaginable exhilaration runs through my veins

You're tempting me my dear

And I'm unable to resist

My Sweet

Soft

Delicious

Juicy

Chocolate covered strawberry
 
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