Opinion about this poem I wrote?

[Tasha P]

fate gave me an angel / handed down a gift / precious cargo to carry / delicate and sweet / intricate pieces / each with a form and function / eyes like jade / glistening with joy / crystal tears flow / a river of glee / a mouth of a goddess / voluptuous and true / speaking with such clarity / mouse through a maze / body of Venus / tempting yet peaceful / welcoming and seductive / a calm ocean of great magnitude / a massive spirit dwells / perfect shell / filled to the brim / energy of a saint / in a whole a wonderful creation / each facet unique and refined/ culmination of an eternity of work / the greatest treasure of the universe