"OOPS I Did It again"..I wrote a poem, please critique..please and thankyou??!!!?

I remember listening
To Britney spears “hit
Me baby one more time”
All of the time and
This song so bubbly
Used to hit my heart
Time after time again
Going through a lot
Britney still has my
Love and passion
For she added lemon
To my rotisserie life
Her issues are human
Issues her problems
Are human problems
Her mistakes are human
Mistakes and although
She has said, “Oops
I did it again” many
Times---I have forgiven
Her for she was and
Has been a memory
I will never forget
Only cherish



I remember when I was a child back in the late 90's early 2000's Britney spears used to be a favorite of mine. I wrote this out of the bottom of my heart. I Call these "Reminiscent poems" because from time to time I will write a poem reminiscing about my child hood=]

Thanks for reading.

Did this poem "Play with your heart" ?

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Hah, I was Like six then, (In 2000) I have a first grade journal that we did for english, and I answered the question "Who is your favorite singer?" And I answered "Bitnay Spars," Yeah, I liked her,too. I like the peom by the way!
 
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