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Zachary Grall

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comments are excepted? You look up to see/ The sky is turning/ And I look away/ My soul is burning/ Like a fire/ Set long ago/ Still like, it was just a moment, oh/ Just a moment ago

Chorus: We go around/ In circles/ We go across/ The edge of the world/ And yet/ Somehow/ We always end the same/ Right, from where we began
(Chorus x1)

You turn, away from the crowd/ And no one is around/ You feel so lonely/ Once again/ It could be time/ We end this wicked game/ The one, where no one wins

(Chorus x2)

We're going, right back/ To the same old, same old/ You can't see, that it's wasting you away/ It's time, we changed/ Our sick and twisted ways

We went around/ In circles/ We went across/ The edge of the world/ And now/ Somehow/ We've finally ended it/ So far from where we began
 
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