okay so i wrote a poem in like 5 minutes and i wanna know is its any good?

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darthchicken304

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here it is

i remember our first kiss
ahh such a wonderful bliss
i was afraid i was gonna miss
but i didn't and it was an amazing thing
to kiss such a wonderful being
the movie could wait
i was a fish and your lips were the bait.
it happened so fast, it happened so suddenly
but it was soo sweet just like a melody
after our kiss we looked at each other and i could tell
my heart was sold no longer for sale.
she had bought it with a kiss straight form heaven
yes i remember that kiss on the eleventh
 
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