Okai, tell me what you think of my poem... ? :D xxx?

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Darkness.

The darkness is crushing, overwhelming and devastating.
Terrifying, petrifying and horrifying
I scream and it's endless, everlasting.
Is this death?
The life beyond?
Or just a dream?
A nightmare?
Twisted, warped and sickening.
I try to sob, but my chest is compressed.
I try to cry out, it doesn't work.
I try to scream once more - it won't work.
The darkness wraps itself around me and whispers sweet things in my ear.
It wraps itself around me like a slimy tentacle - only its velvet and silky.
Seductive and alluring, enthralling.
Compelling, persuasive and drawing.
Pulling me in.
No! i can't, and i won't.
The darkness can't take me - i won't let it!
I see a faint light in my line of my vision.
It grows to a small blob.
I can do this!
The tentacle wraps itself tighter around me and my hope floats away with my breath.
This IS death.
I can fight it.
I can't fight it.
this IS death - how could i ever fight it?
I close my eyes and surrender.
The tentacle loosens its grip.
I'm floating in the air,
Surrounded by darkness.
But it's so gentle, so placid.
Why would i fight it?
That’s dumb.
I sink into the darkness, Becoming part of the night.

Every hear a whisper in the night - thinking it's the wind?
Every seen a dark shadow cross the mirror - but dismissed it as imagination??
Every smelt a queer smell? dry and stale - ignored it?

It's me.
I'm part of the night now.
And I’m watching, waiting for my next victim


Ta

xxx
 
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