Bay Raymond
New member
I just want to see what other people think about the poem...(The meaning)
well here goes,
With only the light from our candle,
We venture on word into a world left for us
Forlorn souls with no where to go
Left in ruins
A place once called home
but now a community lost without a single trace
We rove around with nothing more than a candle
Forlorn souls singing a song 'bout plentiful Fields of grain
We Deserted our minds for maybe just a Second
The Forgotten souls of disappear singing a song of hope
The lonesome home once in ruins now filled with hope
Green plants slither out of the dusty ground
Fresh water flows into the parched river
Sun shines through the clouds of endless peril
And now we leave with only a candle in hand
We venture into a world we know too well
well here goes,
With only the light from our candle,
We venture on word into a world left for us
Forlorn souls with no where to go
Left in ruins
A place once called home
but now a community lost without a single trace
We rove around with nothing more than a candle
Forlorn souls singing a song 'bout plentiful Fields of grain
We Deserted our minds for maybe just a Second
The Forgotten souls of disappear singing a song of hope
The lonesome home once in ruins now filled with hope
Green plants slither out of the dusty ground
Fresh water flows into the parched river
Sun shines through the clouds of endless peril
And now we leave with only a candle in hand
We venture into a world we know too well