ok so i wrote this song for my girlfriend for valentines day?

Emre Cosgun

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i dont know how to present it... should i jus rap it or maybe write it down in a card or somethin?? i cant really rap that well, this song seems kinda hard to rap to, if anyone can help me with a beat or n some tips thatll be awesome!! Here it is feedback on the song would be nice too :)


[Intro]

You mean the world to me,
this is all that i want you to see,
that i love you more then ive loved before,
your the only one that i adore,
I dont have to look anymore,
i found the one ive been searching for,
cos the feeling i get when I look into your eyes,
it was like i was there, heaven in the skies.

[Verse 1]

on my heart you've left a scar
your up in the sky a shining star,
shining so bright never leavin my sight,
i jus wana forever hold you tight,
each day n night, for the rest of my life,
jus forget about all the fights,
put my arms around you n never let go,
be wit u n let our love grow.

im glad i met you in the city that day,
baby girl im happy it turned out this way,
if you left me i wouldnt kno what say,
id be in so much pain,
your the one keepin me sain,
without you id feel inhumain,
in my heart you'll always maintain.

I need your love like plants need rain,
baby girl it's kinda hard for me to explain,
the way you make me feel,
cos it's trapped inside,
to have your love ill do nothing but fight,
in the future your the only one in sight.

[chorus]

all the time im not wit u all i do is reminice,
all the good times we have oh i miss,
when ur about to leave that one last kiss,
keeps me goin it feels so bliss,
girl your worth more to me then a million dimes,
i kno were gonna last for a very long time,
my love for you isnt blind,
for you ill do anything, ill walk a thousand miles,
ill serve a thousand kings,
coz baby to me you mean more then everything,
maybe someday ill buy you that ring.

[Verse 2]

your in my arms right next to me,
baby girl got the best of me,
so i write this song to let you see,
your the only one thats meant for me,
im sorry that we fight,
but at the end of the tunnel theres nothin but light,
when im with you it feels so right,
your in my mind day n night,
baby your nothing but sweet,
with out you i feel incomplete,
dont worry baby i aint never gonna cheat,
bein wit you life feels at its peak,

The thought of you never leaves my mind,
to me baby your one of a kind,
you dont needa worry bout me wantin to resign,
baby no matter what you do you ain gonna cross the line,
never will i leave you alone,
everytime when im by your side is when i feel at home,
everynight were not togethor i feel alone,
im sorry the love i have for you isnt always shown,
the love i had for you since day one has definately grown,
never will i leave you on your own,
n when i do baby ill right be there with you on the phone,

the way ill treat ya, youll feel like a princess,
the love i have for you is jus makin progress,
n from now on ther'll be no more stress,
only when were gonna make love n about to undress,
to me there is no second best,
baby ima have to confess,
before i was wit you i was feelin kinda depressed,
my life was such a mess,
then i met you i couldnt have asked for any less,
there must be god cos im so blessed,
there aint nothin for us,
nothin but success.

[chorus]

all the time im not wit u all i do is reminice,
all the good times we have oh i miss,
when ur about to leave that one last kiss,
keeps me goin it feels so bliss.
girl your worth more to me then a million dimes,
i kno were gonna last for a very long time,
my love for you isnt blind,
for you ill do anything, ill walk a thousand miles,
ill serve a thousand kings,
coz baby to me you mean more then everything,
maybe someday ill buy you that ring.

[Extra stuff]

The thought of you never leaves my mind,
to me baby your one of a kind,
you dont needa worry bout me wantin to resign,
baby no matter what you do you ain gonna cross the line,
 
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