ok so for language class we are writing limericks and I just want to ask you guys what you think?

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ok so first 2 lines are 9 syllables, next 2 lines are 6 syllables, then the last line is 9 syllables. i didnt get anything for my second last line. and if you guys have any comments or anyting to make it better please comment ( and if we can we can make it funny so if u have anything funny to say about snowflakes also comment) SO HERE IS MY LIMERICK: When I was younger I ate snowflakes
When I used to eat snowflakes I would shake
All of them were different
They were all so pretty

When winter comes so do the snowflakes

plz helpppp
 
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