ok how is this second poem i just wrote?

Spartan 19

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Loneliness

You say you’re my friend
But when I asked for help you shrugged me away.
I go home to a full house to be alone
Away from the crowded halls of that lonely school.
All the talking and jokes you’ve done
Are nothing really but meaningless words.
In my lonely room I read my lonely books
Lonely words flowing in my lonely mind.
On a small piece of lonely paper
I write out my lonely life.
And then this lonely night
A lonely boat takes me from this lonely world.
 
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