This is the analysis of this quote: "Guys like us, that work on ranches are the loneliest guys in the world... They don't belong to no place."
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Migrant workers often experience loneliness because they do not have time to establish relationships due to always being on the move. For example, two migrant workers, George Milton and Lennie Small take to the sandy banks of the Salinas River in an attempt to find work on a ranch. In the novel Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck, George expresses to Lennie his frustration for being lonely outcasts. George points out, “Guys like us, that work on ranches are the loneliest guys in the world… They don’t belong to no place” (13).
Although it may seem like George is at his wit’s end, he actually acknowledges the fact that unlike the majority of migrant workers, he and Lennie have each other. George emphasizes, “With us, it ain’t like that. We got a future. We got someone to talk to that gives a damn about us” (13). George and Lennie’s friendship keeps them afloat in this ever so cruel world of pain and suffering, of which, loneliness is the root cause. George puts things into perspective and sees how much better their lives are in comparison to fellow migrant workers. Though migrant workers experience loneliness and feel out of place, George and Lennie have a special relationship that no force on earth could ever break.
Could you read over my paragraph and tell me how to improve it. I need to make sure everything flows nicely... ie: transition works and coherence. Thanks in advance!
Migrant workers often experience loneliness because they do not have time to establish relationships due to always being on the move. For example, two migrant workers, George Milton and Lennie Small take to the sandy banks of the Salinas River in an attempt to find work on a ranch. In the novel Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck, George expresses to Lennie his frustration for being lonely outcasts. George points out, “Guys like us, that work on ranches are the loneliest guys in the world… They don’t belong to no place” (13).
Although it may seem like George is at his wit’s end, he actually acknowledges the fact that unlike the majority of migrant workers, he and Lennie have each other. George emphasizes, “With us, it ain’t like that. We got a future. We got someone to talk to that gives a damn about us” (13). George and Lennie’s friendship keeps them afloat in this ever so cruel world of pain and suffering, of which, loneliness is the root cause. George puts things into perspective and sees how much better their lives are in comparison to fellow migrant workers. Though migrant workers experience loneliness and feel out of place, George and Lennie have a special relationship that no force on earth could ever break.