nocturne terminus/masturbation therapy

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nocturne terminus
sitting atop the scenic knoll
ripping the petals off of
black-eyed susans
without reciting a children's poem
watching the sun set
on the night
a new day?
or just more light.

masturbation therapy
lying on my back
eyes half closed
trying to stroke some
excitement into my limp dick
as i cycle thru the women i know
i finally settle on an ex girlfriend

as i reach for the towel,
i realize i can write to her
and tell her after three years
i finally got my thoughts of her
off my chest
 
I get the feeling of aimless and apathy in the first. That sort of uncertainty, a "coming-of-age" crisis; the definition of adulthood not being met at the moment, given the social expectations.

That last line (being last two in the final stanza) makes the whole thing.

I enjoyed these, sir.
 
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