new to poetry hope u like it?

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Bob Oblong

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she is the girl
the one for me
when i look around
i am finnaly found
when u kiss me i fly away
and i stand there in amaze
so yah shes the girl
the one for me


sorry if it stinks rate 1 to 10
im only 13 and is it good enough to read to my gf?
 
I think it's really good!

I'd rate it a 10, because if I was the girl
I would absolutely love it.
 
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