ok so i started to write a song. its a very rhymey song because i find that easier to write. im only learning to sing and play guitar which makes it harder. it will be an acoustic song. its about a boy liking a girl at a gig but being too shy to make a move. i'll post the 1st verse, say what you thing, its just lyrics
Staring across the room, into a space that looks so gloom There’s a pretty girl standing there, she’s wearing skinny jeans and has long wavy hair, He tries not to stare.
Lonesome boy frozen there, he’s got holes in his jeans and a beanie for hair, As if anybody cares.
Pretty girl looks at the boy, he’s standing there playing with his hair, She tries not to stare.
Staring across the room, into a space that looks so gloom There’s a pretty girl standing there, she’s wearing skinny jeans and has long wavy hair, He tries not to stare.
Lonesome boy frozen there, he’s got holes in his jeans and a beanie for hair, As if anybody cares.
Pretty girl looks at the boy, he’s standing there playing with his hair, She tries not to stare.