New poem, winged, no editing, feedback appreciated?

Løve Mønkey

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I will never let you go
struggle as you might
I will never set you free

your memory is mine

Leave
easy
I refuse to let you go

I can't remember
I must remember
something so important
I will not let it go

Who has gone
God damn it
please come back

Closing in
Shifting shadows
String around the finger

Red ribbon in the hair
Who was she?
I don't care
-
He steps
unto the world
Fills is lungs with empty air
and trudges off
bare
 
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