New poem- "Prayer of the Jaded". Feedback, please?

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To let you know, I present this as a finished work- what I want to know is what you thought of the poem, what it brings to mind, your interpretation, things like that. Not necessarily criticism.
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I pray to Thee the world will see
one day, with saddened eyes,
their demons cast from broken tongues
cause the bitterest goodbyes.

Oh Lord, what will become of me
in all the emotional slaughter?
I'll grow to be what serves you best,
but please, God, not a martyr.
 
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