New poem I wrote...halfway decent?

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When he touched me for the first time I felt a jolt
I looked into those eyes and knew
That these were the irises and pupils
Of the most peculiar creature ever created

My naïve self fixated upon him
My curious mind wanted to touch every waking millimeter
The electricity barreling between our two bodies
It confirmed us
It finalized us
It made us true within ourselves

There was tenderness in his kiss
But eagerness in his eyes
He wanted me, solely me.
The way he touched me, the way I touched him
It was all the same
The same forbidden lust, the fear
The danger


“Liviana” he gasped into my ear.
Hearing my name from those lips as soft as wild rose petals
Caused my body to take control
My legs spread and my hips eagerly moved towards him
The cotton sheets thrashed
Our bodies were one
Our minds were one
Our spirits, our sweat, our heat, our touch
One

Tangled up in sheets we lay there
Never wanting this moment to end
Wanting it to last
Forever…

Forever is what I wanted
Forever is what he had
any takers?




Is it really that bad =(
 
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