New poem. Feedback please?

Beth

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Yes you may have seen this poem before. It's because I have two acounts and it's on both of them :)



She long for the old days to come back
When everything was perfect*
The only thing hurting you were scrapped knees.*
The only thing your running from are boys.
*
But then She came to this hell
Where She wish the only pain is scrapped knees
But it's not like that anymore
Instead of running from Boys She found herself running from herself
The pain
*
With her blood escaping*
Still She only hears
" it's all your fault"
All her friends suffering
For she cause them much pain
For being the way she is
She begin to believe *it's all her fault
And start to wonder
Is living worth it?**

Now she's *Hoping for a hand*
To lift her back up
She gets a foot instead*
To push her further down*

Now Shes drowning in her own blood
Fighting for the air
All that it will take to save her
Is that hand She gaved *up on long ago

For now it's almost to late
She's *been drowning In this hell
In her blood
For quit some time now

*all the help She used to have
Is gone
For no one knows how to help the*
Insane girl.*
 
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