New poem (: any comments/critiques please?

Lou lou

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>< Cage ><

to Cage a bird you
need to Capture,
Confine, and
Tame.
a great skill we all learn.
the mind becomes our playground,
a fair in which we ride any ride
we wish. we
create the fair, the
experience.
until the bird is No longer
a bird.
it has been
Destroyed with our
fumbling aims of
Perfection.
the bird becomes a Crow,
Stripped of it’s natural being.
as a child becomes an Adult,
Stripped of an Imagination.
 
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