Need some feedback on lyrics?

MaraMelodiee

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Please don't be too harsh im only 14 (: I can imagine these lyrics to a song like "306" by Emilie Autumn.



Don't you miss mourning bells
and the crinkle of black crape?
Don't you miss lavish feathers
placed in a morbid dream scape?

There's no use hiding, there's no use
It will find you, it will bring you down
At least pick out your feather men and flames
Before you turn the dust into something richer

I'm screaming the truth
You can't hide, You can't hide
I will wave goodbye, I will sing sweet lullabies
I know you'll hear it, you'll look down on your seraphs
and see me singing sweet lullabies

There's beauty in pain,
But we killed it, the beauty is still smeared on our hands
We violated an alluring procession, we view agony as taboo
Sit back and bow your head, don't bite your tongue

There's no use hiding, there's no use
It will find you, it will bring you down
Pick out your mourning dresses and midnight feasts
Before I watch you fall into dreamless ground

What value does life have without it's counterpart
Two seams ripped apart by our hands
Celebrations won't save me
but at least I'll love every second of it while im in frost-bitten clouds
where will they take me?
i don't care as long as it has windows

so I can gaze upon the weary streets of London
And admire my procession, marching down the weary streets of London
and see your jet jewels and contorting capes

There's no use hiding, there's no use
It will find you, it will bring you down
Should I invite enemies as guests
While I'm sitting far above

There's no use hiding, there's no use
It will find you, it will bring you down
Should I invite enemies as guests
While I'm sitting far above
while I'm sitting far above
Amid the classics



Thanks for answering,
much appreciated (:
 
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