Need help with my poem (Sestina)?

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I'm writing this poem to a girl who moved to another school who were in my class and as a group
here's what i have and need help with:



The moment you've left us
our hearts were in shock
deep inside, creating a wound
as if you just lost your best friends
we will miss you
but our memories that we'll never forget


We shared our thoughts that couldn't forget
creating our own images of us
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A group that we stand for, but also as your friends
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I know this isn't right category but
if you can help me start next line(s) or give me some ideas, it would be FANTASTIC!

thanks!
 
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