Need help with ending to my short story.....?

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I've written a short story about a girl in hospital who has been in a crash and since it is a short story it needs to have suspense before the ending so i was gunna have her all worried about her parents and then a doctor comes and tells her that both her parents died.
Can anybody help me with the structure and stuff? And i don't know if this a good ending or not...so yeah..need your feedback....
 
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