Need help with characters in my story?

WeDntFall

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I've written out the four characters who will appear most in the book:
Main character: Rowan Blake.
Age: 15
Hair: Autumn coloured. Reaches her shoulders and falls over her face nicely.
Eyes: Dark brown with light bursts.
Face: Oval but more efficient when it comes to her jaw, smoothing roundly at her chin.

Hitch Hiker: Lialin Emerson.
Age: 18
Hair: Naturally black. His fringe traces his eyes, and the back of his hair is spiked, leaving the hair at the front smoothly covering his ears.
Eyes: Caribbean Aqua.
Face: Upside down teardrop, his jaw line and chin smooth, cheeks a bit defined.

M.C + H.H’s Child: Fabian Emerson.
Age: Gets born in book.
Hair: Autumn coloured with blonde and black natural streaks.
Eyes: Caribbean Aqua.
Face: Oval but a similar jaw line to Lialin’s.

H.H’s Uncle: Greg Emerson.
Age: 48
Hair: Curly and black.
Eyes: Caribbean Aqua.
Face: Upside down teardrop.

Is there anything that I should add/change?
Opinions please :)
@ kj, my hair has natural blonde and black streaks.
 
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