Need help with a rock/metal song im writing.?

Jacob B

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This would be my first song ever attempted and im stuck here. lol anything helps.
i was thinking it sound like bullet for my valentine. not to soft. but not too hard core either.

Have you had your heart broken
It tears you up inside.
It makes nothing else important
Nothing means to YOU!

(screamo)
I could end life at any minute
Do it! and take the bullet!
(screamo)

I keep thinking about her
wanting to hold her one last time
if a minute cost a dime
id be broke.. loving her!

Ive got my finger on the trigger
leaving everything behind
As i point it at my head
i remember all the good times we've had

Have you had your heart broken?
it tears you up inside
It makes nuthing else important
Nothing means to YOU!

(screamo)
I can end my life at any minute!
Why cant i just take the bullet!
Can i take the bullet?
(screamo)

Being all tore up inside
i just want her beside me
is it too much to ask for!
is it too much to ask for?
 
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