Angela Grae
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i feel that the blurb i have for my story now is too long and delves too deeply into the romance side of the story and not enough of the fantasy. please help!
this is what the blurb is:
Angela is caught between the love of two angels. Seth -sweet, caring, and protective- would do anything for Angela...except fall for her. He can't risk losing her friendship or love, just because of some "feelings" they may have for one another. Night, on the other hand, is a different matter. Being a fallen angel, Night is basically off-limits to Angela -however this fact doesn't make him any less attractive to Angela. In fact, isn't there a saying about forbidden fruit being more desirable?
Which angel can she trust? Which will destroy her?
Angela's choice could not only change her destiny but the entire fate of the rest of the worlds.
i want it to be ominous, and not so obvious. (the connection between the names Angela - angel- and Night -dark- were unintentional) i would like it to say more about betrayal and lies, less with the love and make it more lustrous. something like that. if u have an questions just ask.
thanks!!!!
this is what the blurb is:
Angela is caught between the love of two angels. Seth -sweet, caring, and protective- would do anything for Angela...except fall for her. He can't risk losing her friendship or love, just because of some "feelings" they may have for one another. Night, on the other hand, is a different matter. Being a fallen angel, Night is basically off-limits to Angela -however this fact doesn't make him any less attractive to Angela. In fact, isn't there a saying about forbidden fruit being more desirable?
Which angel can she trust? Which will destroy her?
Angela's choice could not only change her destiny but the entire fate of the rest of the worlds.
i want it to be ominous, and not so obvious. (the connection between the names Angela - angel- and Night -dark- were unintentional) i would like it to say more about betrayal and lies, less with the love and make it more lustrous. something like that. if u have an questions just ask.
thanks!!!!