Jason Barns
New member
This is personal to me because there are some bible verses that affect me personally, and I constantly say sorry because peopele constantly bring things up about me, and im starting to let the past go, and I need something about controling emotions.
I need atleast 2 more stanzas talking about letting go of the past and controlling my emotions so 4 really.
Heres the poem and what do you think:
the lord knows the way of the righteous: but the way of the ungodly shall perish
so let us bare and forgive eachother
and you saved us from mankind and you still the hunger of those you cherish
so what dont kill us makes us stronger
Until you find a spark,
not even close to large.
it leads you out of the dark,
and takes you back, free of charge.
Our light and temporary battles are shaping us for an eternal glory that outweighs them all
so now we must fix our eyes not on what is seen
and since we are so ready for these walls to fall
we fix our eyes on what is going to be unseen
You then look past the hate, the regret.
and find the beatiful things around you,
all the small things that clutter your mind, you forget.
and then true happiness, you do not need pursue
and yes we have struggles and trials
so let us not be discouraged nor afraid for this battle is not ours to fight
and because his delay is not a denial
we walk by faith and not by sight
Im sorry I hurt you
Im sorry I get emotional
Im sorry im sorry if this is true
Im sorry but you need to let that go
Im sorry if she/he hurt you
Im sorry that you feel the need to take it out on me
Im sorry if your blue
Im sorry but that’s just me being B
so let us not become weary in doing good
for at the proper time we will reap a harvest if we do not give up
What do you think of it so far..I know I need to work on it better...its for my Family Reunion talent show.
I need atleast 2 more stanzas talking about letting go of the past and controlling my emotions so 4 really.
Heres the poem and what do you think:
the lord knows the way of the righteous: but the way of the ungodly shall perish
so let us bare and forgive eachother
and you saved us from mankind and you still the hunger of those you cherish
so what dont kill us makes us stronger
Until you find a spark,
not even close to large.
it leads you out of the dark,
and takes you back, free of charge.
Our light and temporary battles are shaping us for an eternal glory that outweighs them all
so now we must fix our eyes not on what is seen
and since we are so ready for these walls to fall
we fix our eyes on what is going to be unseen
You then look past the hate, the regret.
and find the beatiful things around you,
all the small things that clutter your mind, you forget.
and then true happiness, you do not need pursue
and yes we have struggles and trials
so let us not be discouraged nor afraid for this battle is not ours to fight
and because his delay is not a denial
we walk by faith and not by sight
Im sorry I hurt you
Im sorry I get emotional
Im sorry im sorry if this is true
Im sorry but you need to let that go
Im sorry if she/he hurt you
Im sorry that you feel the need to take it out on me
Im sorry if your blue
Im sorry but that’s just me being B
so let us not become weary in doing good
for at the proper time we will reap a harvest if we do not give up
What do you think of it so far..I know I need to work on it better...its for my Family Reunion talent show.