my summary of my story?

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do u like it rate plz.!xxxx heres the summary of it

its called a ghost next door where theres this girl and she had a dream about she was in a fire and that she died then she woke up and her nextdoor neiughbour was there but there had been no nextdoor neighbour for years then she met the boy next door and he sed he had lived there 4 years and he had never seen her. the she thinks he is a ghost and in the end it turns out she was the ghost because she actually did die in the fire years ago!
 
it sounds like something thats been done a thousand times before however if youre going to write it i hope you actually know grammar and punctuation and wont write it like you did your question and use the odd comma and capital letter and dont use words like sed and terms like 4 years and an occasionally well placed apostrophe would be nice
 
Sorry to say this but the idea's taken. Word-for-word. It's a goosbumps story, I liked it but I don't think you should write that story because...well...its already been done.

Sorry...
 
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