My Story What do you think?

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I am writing a story it is not good at all but its just what i feel like writing down which i am.

http://www.freewebs.com/lyfofateenager/index.htm

What do you think HONESTLY tell me if it is absolutly CRAP and boring.
Its only the first chapter.
Click chapter one.
 
go for it there is a book in everyone. If you don't try it you will never know. Good luck.
 
I didn't read it, but I have some advice, being a writer myself. Avoid putting your work on the internet, where hundreds of people could see and steal your work, or take your idea to make a story of their own. You'd be surprised how many people look for ideas and take them.
 
ok it was a intersting first chapter but what did the girls do at the end why were you so mad you have to be more specific with things bring the color out of you mind and through the heart into the letters your readers need to be drooling at the end of their seat wishing for the next page
 
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