my story on fictionpress?

[m[i]ss s[i]mpl[i]c[i]ty.]

i just started a story on fictionpress and i wanted to see what you guys think. It's a romance story, and i only have one chapter posted. please review if you have an account, but i just want your thoughts....

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2494316/1/An_Accidental_Kiss

 

[Shera M]

Publishers will not touch stories that are posted online.

Just so you know.