"my purity" <3 - a poem?

[jen4sexx2]

My purity, my purity
they tryin' steal my purity
they lifting all these weights
and they taken me on dates

and I say that I can pay
but, "I insist," they say,
field of vision must be tint
'cause they just can't take the hint

They want to take my purity,
put it in obscurity
but that's not how I do it
I need to be true to it

Not to be a dunce
but I can only give it once
so until the time is right
for my sweet purity I fight

please be honest but not too harsh <3

 

[Brooke R]

i like it, honestly.

 

[Jules]

cool =) i like the message

 

[dakgraha]

kind of corny if you ask me

 

[Ryan]

That is really fucking good. You should enter this into a contest, and write some more.

 

[sooz]

its gramatically fucked, ut i guess you made it that way
i like it.

 

[i<3you(:]

i like it
ha, its true for most guys these days.