My poem, what do you think?

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Two beautiful girls
On a windy corner
Of a dirty street
Smiling to one another
In the fading light

With their leather boots
And dark make up
They wait
For something more, something better
Out there

Blue and black arms
Covered by bracelets
In all sorts of colors
With all sorts of charms

The predator at night
Hiding from the truth
Hiding from the light
They would pray to God
Please make it stop

It don’t make no difference
Escaping one last time
From this shame
In the darkest night
They prayed to God
Please make it stop
 
i like the way it sounds when you read it- rhythmic. good poem. kinda heavy feeling afterward, but good.
 
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