My poem, Queen of Hearts. Should I change anything?

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Queen of Hearts
Thats what you are
Whats that on my card?
That is your scar
For this scarred card
Was once a king
He still would be
If he knew of the wrath the queen could bring
For this fair king, now half as tall
Perhaps a deuce? Queen watch him fall
The queen and the joker, now they play the game
But that poor card, his fate the same
 
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