Opinion/Constructive feedback : )
I'm not to sure one on it, what do you think?
Interpretations
They tell me I am beautiful,
Something I cannot see.
Is it hiding within the cracks
Or is it somewhere deep inside of me?
Imperfection is all I see
They say beauty lies within,
What we see is only skin deep.
So I pick away at the surface
Nothing has yet been found,
Though the deep I go the more intense the sound.
The truth is what I want to know
As I stare at my reflection.
The one that far from pleases me,
Where is the beauty that they can see?
Thankss
I just realised there are a few spelling mistakes, I apologize.
I'm not to sure one on it, what do you think?
Interpretations
They tell me I am beautiful,
Something I cannot see.
Is it hiding within the cracks
Or is it somewhere deep inside of me?
Imperfection is all I see
They say beauty lies within,
What we see is only skin deep.
So I pick away at the surface
Nothing has yet been found,
Though the deep I go the more intense the sound.
The truth is what I want to know
As I stare at my reflection.
The one that far from pleases me,
Where is the beauty that they can see?
Thankss
I just realised there are a few spelling mistakes, I apologize.