My poem...?(20 characters)?

DON'T EAT ME!

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It's about one of my friends. It's more of a poem/story ish thing... To clarify: the lines with the > symbol are another person speaking/inner voice, however you see it, and when the lines repeat, it's representing the 2 voices speaking as one.
She’s broken.
Someone
Anyone
help her.
>Why not you?
>You left her with them.
>How could you let this happen?
How could anyone let this happen?
>You knew they’d get her into trouble.
I thought she knew bet–
>You thought WRONG!
She never truly liked me.
She pitied me.
I’m not good enough.
>You were good enough…
Before. >Before.

I always thought I’d be one to do that…
slowly
but surely
kill myself.
>She never seemed like that type.
No one expected it.

How>How?
When>When?
Why>Why?
Is there any way to help her?
>I’m afraid she can only help herself.
>She doesn’t realize the danger ahead.
She doesn’t realize the death ahead.
We have to stop her. >We have to stop her.
Open your eyes.
>It’s just not worth it.
You have to stop.

Let me know if you get it...watch for some of my other poems if you liked it :)
 
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