my first sonnet..what do you think?

C

country singer

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I was a child, feeling as child, being a child was so

innocent. I grew to know thou real life of living

so did living come so indefinite. My heart opened,

my blood flooded with truth, and my passion

grew. Things that once were questions

were now answers I knew. I felt that life had

made a new life for me. Thou sun

shines, thou moon glows. Thou world is

changing also I see. If I had only

known what was planed for me then my

eyes would have never cried for greed. All I think

of now is what I should do and what I

should be. For now I know thou

light in me he does truly see.

I will walk all my days to thou day I die.

I will not be afraid of thou sprit inside.

I walk with kings and Queen of truth.

I will be a world and strength of youth.

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