okay so i had to write a really hard poem and its kinda bad so critique it as much as u can lol. i dont care if ur to harsh lol i want criticism!
Mir
In three words,
Loving, caring, talkative,
Best friend is like
a sister to him,
Looks forward
To friends,
Studying, and high school,
Afraid to fail or
Loose someone dear to him,
Being accepted into
Suncoast is an accomplishment
He’s excited to experience
New things and have fun.
He lives in West Palm Beach
Islam
Mir
In three words,
Loving, caring, talkative,
Best friend is like
a sister to him,
Looks forward
To friends,
Studying, and high school,
Afraid to fail or
Loose someone dear to him,
Being accepted into
Suncoast is an accomplishment
He’s excited to experience
New things and have fun.
He lives in West Palm Beach
Islam