Mr.Observant
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I stand at the shore
Of this black and caustic lake
Corroding the mind
Eroding the body
I know it’s wrong
But this deathly place
It calls my soul
And draws my thoughts
How long have I been here?
In this place, of destructive love
Even time stands unmoved
This is the blighted marsh
Nobody comes, nobody leaves
Nobody smiles, nobody grieves
Nobody ages, nobody dies
Nobodies silent, yet nobody speaks
This place of contradiction
Is becoming a part of my soul
Just as I'm becoming a part of its
This ghoulish relationship eats at me
I walk upon its glassy shore
Past the others the marsh has claimed
I'm the only one alive
But I'm already dead
There’s no other choice for me
I have come to realise
That the only way to escape
Is to stay forever
So, fond world, I bid thee goodbye
And face the source of my desire
This blighted marsh will claim its last
This turbulent night.
One heavy step at a time,
I walk towards the epicentre of guilt
On hands and knees I crawl
To seek the solace of the lake bed
I reach the centre of the brackish pit
And open my mind to the hate
I sacrifice myself, on this night of nights
The lake and I have become one
I am overwhelmed
never to rise again
as the world begins to fade
i laugh, mocking the mess ive made
this is an apology to the people who made it to this point, im sorry its so long
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oh and yes, this section of Y!A will be seeing a fair bit more of my poems, so add me if you want to see them roll in.
have fun, leave opinion bellow
I stand at the shore
Of this black and caustic lake
Corroding the mind
Eroding the body
I know it’s wrong
But this deathly place
It calls my soul
And draws my thoughts
How long have I been here?
In this place, of destructive love
Even time stands unmoved
This is the blighted marsh
Nobody comes, nobody leaves
Nobody smiles, nobody grieves
Nobody ages, nobody dies
Nobodies silent, yet nobody speaks
This place of contradiction
Is becoming a part of my soul
Just as I'm becoming a part of its
This ghoulish relationship eats at me
I walk upon its glassy shore
Past the others the marsh has claimed
I'm the only one alive
But I'm already dead
There’s no other choice for me
I have come to realise
That the only way to escape
Is to stay forever
So, fond world, I bid thee goodbye
And face the source of my desire
This blighted marsh will claim its last
This turbulent night.
One heavy step at a time,
I walk towards the epicentre of guilt
On hands and knees I crawl
To seek the solace of the lake bed
I reach the centre of the brackish pit
And open my mind to the hate
I sacrifice myself, on this night of nights
The lake and I have become one
I am overwhelmed
never to rise again
as the world begins to fade
i laugh, mocking the mess ive made
this is an apology to the people who made it to this point, im sorry its so long
:oh and yes, this section of Y!A will be seeing a fair bit more of my poems, so add me if you want to see them roll in.