Mirrors

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ijoinedyou

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A friend and I wrote this song about 10 months ago during our senior year of high school for the fun of it. Now we're both in college (im attending Washington State University and he's going to Hillsong Music College in Australia!) and I've been listening to this song a lot lately, mostly since it brings back fond memories. I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on this tune and whether or not it would be worth re-recording next year when we're both back in Washington. My buddy wrote the piano and melody, while I composed the guitar and lyrics. I've never attempted to promote it on the internet or anything, but I've really been curious what people would think of it. Its called "Mirrors". The production quality isn't the greatest since it was done live in one afternoon.
He's a link to the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjSYi-xmkzI

Lyrics:

Mirrors

Windows or mirrors
Its you or me
Reflection echos filth
But your image keeps it clean

Tarnished in tears
Broken by the years
Corruption fades away
When i see you way is lost

Through the fire, across the wire
You fall on your own direction
I let you fall, I watch you crawl
Only to save me from the refection, I see

Looking through the glass
I see the broken past
The solemn noise
brings peace to my ears

Hardened by the truth
The truth that sets me free
As gallows beckon you
The noose falls away

Through the fire, across the wire
You fall on your own direction
I let you fall I watch you crawl
Only to save me from the refection, I see

What is this image
Staring back at me
Such desolate mire
That i can barley see

its me.....

Empathy's gone, gone with the heart
And all thats left is my own destruction
Its who i am, its what I've become
Filling the deepest part of me
 
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