Lyrics written by 16 yr old, what do you think?

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Charlie

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Well, really I'm 15, but I'll be 16 next month so oh well. lol. I wrote this a few days ago, what do you think?




Verse 1.
I need your help. I feel so alone. I'm out of place, out of my comfort zone.
I'm looking around, there's answers to find...
If I ask for your hand, will you take my mine?
If I ask for advice, will it take over my mind?

Chorus.
I'm running to you... Do you know what to do?
I'm not good at being on my own.
I'm running to you... Do you know what to do?
I'm walking away to face the unknown.

Verse 2.
I haven't failed. There's still hope. I'm trying, but they act like it's a joke.
I'm saving time, There's still so far to climb...
If I ask for your hand, will you take mine?
If I ask for advice will it take over my mind?

Chorus.
I'm running to you... Do you know what to do?
I'm not good at being on my own.
I'm running to you... Do you know what to do?
I'm walking away to face the unknown.

Bridge.
If I ask for your hand, will you understand?
If I ask for advice, will you save my life?
When I ask for your hand, will you take mine?
When I ask for advice, will you take over...

Chorus.
I'm running to you... Do you know what to do?
I'm not good at being on my own.
I'm running to you... Do you know what to do?
I'm walking away to face the unknown.
 
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