lyric/poetry.. any good? could you see this as a song?

Spitburn

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("Goodbye", by yours truly.. thanks)

drifting slowly through the night
in the rain, the dim light
driving past my ex-woman's home
and I remember, I'm all alone
not once had I even thought that
I would have drew white flag
surrender to the madness
to the badness, that's bleeding through

and I let it all go (x3)
goodbye!

wave hello to the friendly people
in a church, a great cathedral
they all look so lovely there
try and be one, if you dare
you lucky devil
you lucky man
you lady luck
you think I suck
from the bottle
of the devil
like a rebel
but I'm a grown man

and I let it go (x3)
goodbye!


I said my farewell
to that selfish lady
that bratty kid
that little girl
I done left her out my door..
an' she's goin' home
Country eh? I was thinking more along the lines of blues, but it would be interesting to take a shot at country. Never tried country before..
 
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