''love'' my FIRST poem i EVER wrote plzz comment?

[UOPHXstudent]

"love is in the air love is what two peopls share love isnt always right love shines like the light love is like a dream love is not what it seems"

I think you have caputured what love trully is.

 

[hailes]

hey my name is hailey i wrote this poem its called love comment and let me know what u think about: love is in the air love is what two peopls share love isnt always right love shines like the light love is like a dream love is not what it seems plzz comment and let me know what u think i know its a little cheesy but i;m 12 an its my first poem

 

[Emily W]

i think its pretty good.
just remember that not all poems have to rhyme, and try exploring differnt types of poetry.

 

[n!Nj@ bAybaY]

aaww thats cute hunny. jus kno that love is not really all this beautiful stuff that movies and magazines show it as. but keep up the poetry, its nice. poetry is a wonderful talent

 

[EScope17]

Its ok but if its your first poem ever youll get better

 

[dancing panda fury]

it's not original, it's like you've put together lines from different (bad) pop songs

 

[Drew]

For being 12 and an on the spot piece of work great!