NatalieBeauty
New member
I wrote this when I was 13 years old. I am now 14. Any criticism that you have, good or bad, would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!
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Nobody seems to notice, the tears that I have cried.
For if they ever knew, they would sympathize me, or they would have at least tried.
My emotions are very mixed, I can never seem to conclude how I feel.
I have poured my problems into the territory of many strangers, but I don't ever heal.
I wish somebody would just listen and understand everything I say.
If that opportunity arrives, I will surely speak up if I may.
But until then, I am cold, scared and alone.
I wish these tears that I have cried were known.
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Looking back at it, I could have improved a few things.
Anyhow, thanks!
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Nobody seems to notice, the tears that I have cried.
For if they ever knew, they would sympathize me, or they would have at least tried.
My emotions are very mixed, I can never seem to conclude how I feel.
I have poured my problems into the territory of many strangers, but I don't ever heal.
I wish somebody would just listen and understand everything I say.
If that opportunity arrives, I will surely speak up if I may.
But until then, I am cold, scared and alone.
I wish these tears that I have cried were known.
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Looking back at it, I could have improved a few things.
Anyhow, thanks!